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Prologue
Jack groaned, blinking his eye sockets open and gazing upward. He was on his knees, his skeletal arms shackled by his wrists to the wall. His suit was torn and disgustingly dirty. He had smudges on his skull. He was battered and beaten, even for a skeleton. He didn't see Sally, nor heard anything. It took a moment for his eye sockets to adjust to the pitch-black darkness surrounding him.  Once he could see better, he realized he was in a dungeon, dark, dank, dirty, and  foul.  He tried to break his chains, but to no prevail. He let himself go limp.  He thought, panic rising from within him "I need to hurry, get out.. Where is Sally?" he forced the panic away and started to frantically work himself out of the dreaded chains connecting him to the wall, but then froze. Sally was screaming. She was... In deep pain, horrible agony as it sounded. " No! Sally! SALLY!!" he roared thrusting himself forward furiously to break the chains. Her pained and agonized screams suddenly ceased and a new sound rang out. Insane, Demoniac, Blood curdling laughter.
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My first thingymagie! ANd dont rant, that is the PROLOGUE like it says. I am younger then you might thing so dont expect to much! Please. This is just what happens later, and since im writing a story, like it shows, i constently am editing. Nightmare Before Christmas like story, after Oogies Revenge, the characters all belong to tim Burton and them, except for the villian, well, my villian. Thanks! R&R (Read and Review) please!

~~!UPDATE!~~
As you can see, i have no picture.
Any help?
If you want to make me one... Ask, Pwease?
Another UPDATE
Guys.. Kill my brother with a fork!.... Well, he broke my laptop.. It had all my story on it. All this on here, its whats left of it. So, i have a setback.
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~1redgirl1 Jul 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Holy Roman Empire this is good! very well written
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~Oogie-s-Revenge Jul 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Danke!
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~1redgirl1 Jul 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
bitte!
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~FantasyDreamer16 Feb 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is AMAZINGLY written ! :) Great job!
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~Oogie-s-Revenge Feb 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! The second chapter is going to get posted soon!
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~FantasyDreamer16 Feb 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
YAAAAAAAY! :XD: I`m excited!
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~Oogie-s-Revenge Feb 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol great!
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~Tazzie15 Feb 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is really good, I can't wait for chapter 1
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~Oogie-s-Revenge Feb 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks... And dang thing changed the word. Scrach out bottom post.
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